虛幻國度

In London, there was a great doctor named Dr. Jekyll. Everyone only saw the great part of his behavior, but nobody noticed the bad of him. Dr. Jekyll made a drug that it can let him turn the great particularity to the sad side. He thought that he probably failed, so he drank it scared. First, his body was sharking and he felt in pain. And then his body became small and small. While it all happened, he will become Mr. Hyde. When he was Mr. Hyde, he felt himself at last absolutely free. He can do anything what he wanted and he did not have any responsible for all the things. The best thing is that he can use this drug turn into Dr. Jekyll again. But if he used this drug frequently, he will need this drug heavier. Mr. Hyde did a lot of terrible things and even killed a great old man. Mr. Hyde felt scared, because it may let him in jail. He used the drug to change him to Dr. Jekyll, and promised himself: “I will not to be Mr. Hyde again.” One day, he was at a park, and he found a thing. Although he did not drink the drug, he still changed to Mr. Hyde in a few hours. When he turned Mr. Hyde completely that was terrible to him. If he is seen by anyone when he walked on a street, he will be caught and hanged. He covered his face and ran as soon as possible. He crashing in his lab and he wanted to do Dr. Jekyll, so he used the last drug to change himself. He knew that he will get back to Mr. Hyde, and he can not get this drug anymore. His friends will found this truth, so he allotted the medicine and let the story end. Then this story finished. 
 

呃呵呵......
嗯...
抱歉...
被我亂加亂減了ˇˇ
我也不知道對不對...
就這樣亂搞...
最後的部份...
有些文意我看不懂ˇˇ
就大致上看一看...
還有阿~
你會無意識拼錯字耶XD((應該是無意識~~~
caught不是c"o"ught
還有一開始討論的那個...
heaiver前面其實不需要more...
標點符號...

阿~總之我很隨意的挑東挑西ˇˇ
((不要嫌我雞婆囉唆阿~~~~~
嗯...
有些被我調順序了...
這就不要管我啦<<只是個人習慣問題...
呃...看看就好~
把你拼錯的地方和動詞某些沒注意到的時態改一改...
剩下的就不用管我打什麼啦~

呃...還有阿...
我先警告你喔~~~
我英文很破的ˇˇ
所以別太相信我的破英文啦XD

唉...現在我要去睡了ˇˇ
晚安XDD